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Elevator pitch examples for business

Here’s a practical guide to crafting and using elevator pitches, with plug-and-play frameworks and real examples you can adapt immediately.

The 4-Part Framework (Before You Write)

Every effective pitch follows this structure. Fill in the blanks:

  1. The Hook (Problem or intriguing fact) → "Did you know…" or "Most companies struggle with…"
  2. The Solution (What you do/offer) → "We solve this by…"
  3. The Proof (Credibility metric) → "We’ve helped X achieve Y"
  4. The Ask (Specific next step) → "I’d love to show you…"

5 Fill-in-the-Blank Templates

Template 1: The Problem-First Pitch (Best for B2B/SaaS)

"Most [target customers] lose [money/time] every month because [specific pain point]. [Your Company] is a [category] that [unique solution]—without [common objection]. We just helped [impressive client] increase [metric] by [number] in [timeframe]. I’m looking to connect with [specific person/role] who handle [responsibility]—would you be open to a 15-minute call next Tuesday to see if we’re a fit?"

Real Example:

"Most mid-size law firms lose 20 hours weekly to manual document review. LexiScan is an AI tool that automates contract analysis—without requiring IT setup. We just helped Morrison & Associates reduce review time by 70% in 30 days. I’m looking to connect with managing partners who oversee compliance—would you be open to a brief demo next week?"

Template 2: The Vision Pitch (Best for Startups/Investors)

"The future of [industry] is [trend], but [current players] are stuck doing [old method]. We’re building [product] that [benefit] by [mechanism]. Unlike [competitor], we [key differentiator]. We’ve [traction metric] and are raising [funding round] to [goal]. Are you currently looking at opportunities in [space]?"

Real Example:

"Traditional banking excludes 2 billion unbanked people globally. We’re building PayBridge, a mobile wallet that uses blockchain to verify identity through community networks rather than credit scores. Unlike Western Union, we charge 1% fees and settle in minutes. We’ve onboarded 50,000 users in Kenya and are raising our Series A to expand to Nigeria. Are you currently looking at fintech opportunities in emerging markets?"

Template 3: The Credibility-First Pitch (Best for Consultants/Freelancers)

"I help [specific audience] [achieve desired outcome]. My background in [credentials] gave me insight into [unique perspective]. For example, I recently [specific result for client]. I’m currently taking on [number] new clients who need help with [specific problem]. Do you know any [decision-makers] looking to [goal] this quarter?"

Real Example:

"I help DTC e-commerce brands scale from $1M to $10M without burning cash on unprofitable ads. My background as Facebook’s former ad algorithm lead gave me insight into which metrics actually drive the auction. I recently helped a skincare brand break $10K/day in profitable spend. I’m taking on two new clients who need help with Q4 scaling—do you know any CMOs preparing for holiday inventory pushes?"

Template 4: The Micro-Pitch (Best for Networking Events/Casual Meetups)

"I work with [who] to [what]. Specifically, I [unique mechanism]. The coolest part is [interesting fact/social proof]. What’s your biggest challenge with [relevant area] right now?"

Real Example:

"I work with restaurant groups to eliminate food waste. Specifically, I created an appetite prediction algorithm that adjusts ordering in real-time. The coolest part—we just saved a 12-location chain $100K in their first quarter. What’s your biggest operational headache these days?"

Template 5: The Job Seeker Pivot

"I’m a [current role] specializing in [skill], but I’m transitioning into [target role/industry] because [motivation]. In my current role, I [achievement with numbers] which translates directly to [target company’s need]. I’d love to learn about [specific question about their work]—do you have 10 minutes for coffee next week?"

Real Example:

"I’m a supply chain manager specializing in predictive analytics, transitioning into climate tech because I want to apply logistics optimization to carbon capture. In my current role, I reduced shipping costs by $1M annually using route algorithms—experience that translates directly to optimizing CO2 transport networks. I’d love to learn how your team approaches logistics partnerships—do you have 10 minutes for coffee next week?"


Action Steps to Deploy Today

Step 1: Write Three Versions

  • 15 seconds (for cocktail parties)
  • 30 seconds (standard elevator ride)
  • 60 seconds (formal pitches)

Step 2: A/B Test Your Hook Record yourself delivering two different opening lines. Test them on 5 people each. Which one generates "Tell me more" vs. "That’s nice"?

Step 3: Master the Bridge When someone shows interest, don’t ramble. Use this transition:

"That’s exactly why we built this. The key insight was [one sentence]. The best way to show you is [propose specific next step]."

Step 4: Create the "Pocket Ask" Always have three specific requests ready depending on who you’re talking to:

  • Peer: "Can I get your feedback on our landing page?"
  • Prospect: "Can I send you our case study on [industry]?"
  • Investor: "Would you be open to seeing our deck next week?"

Quick Delivery Tips

  • Pause after the problem statement (let them nod)
  • Use contrast: "Not X, but Y" creates clarity
  • End with a question to turn a monologue into a conversation
  • Practice the "So What?" test—after every sentence, ask yourself "So what?" and answer it in the next line

To help you refine these further:

  1. Which context fits you best—are you pitching to investors, networking for clients, or job hunting? I can give you industry-specific examples.

  2. What’s your biggest hesitation right now—getting the opening hook right, handling objections, or transitioning from pitch to conversation?

  3. Do you have a specific event coming up (conference, investor meeting, job fair) where you need to test these? I can help you roleplay the likely scenarios you’ll face.